Pitch Discussions (Essay Sample)

Pitch Discussions
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Pitch Discussions
Aaron Trinidad's pitch is excellent. He has applied all the requirements of his business pitch about 'Lender.' Notably, a successful business pitch entails aspects such as business opportunity, value, target market, competitive analysis, research, and marketing strategy. Trinidad has incorporated these facts in his pitch, whereby he has identified a marketing plan, competitive analysis, and target market, among others about his app. Moreover, Trinidad's presentation has integrated a multileveled pitch that engaged the audience and judges while keeping time. Trinidad gets to the point through both short and long versions of the pitch. For example, shorter versions have provided a basis about Lender, while longer versions have presented details on the plan's execution. Lastly, Trinidad has invested in research about his pitch since he answers all the judges' questions perfectly.
Jasmine Adam's pitch about 'Smudgies' is also perfect. However, it requires some enhancements regarding a business pitch's requirements and presentation to the audience. For instance, Jasmine has not identified vital factors such as marketing strategy and competition due to the social media influencers. The lack of a multileveled version of the pitch has prevented de