Peer Review (Essay Sample)

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Peer-review and Evolution on Cyber Ethics
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Points Possible

Points Earned Based on this Peer-review

Key ideas

2

The key ideas are clearly identified including the dilemma. (2)
Clear supportive evidence of each idea. (2)
Explanation about ‘why things are as they are’ is thorough. (2)

6

6

Modalities or perspectives

3

Each modality is clearly identified. (3)
Addresses the situation by clarifying and describing three; social, technological, economic, or political dimensions. (6)

9

7

Top Factors

6

Separate sources, ordered in importance, cited

12

12

Hurdle or concern

6

Naming and describing how this factor is a hurdle or concern

6

4

Annotation

6

Summarize articles’ insight on the topic or the dilemma at hand

12

12

Facts

3

Naming and describing factual information; often numeric

3

2

Why and meaning

3

Reasons for the fact being important, discuss future ramifications

6

6

Moral system

2

Named and defined system being applied

2

2

Solution and rationale

1

Solution is explained, challenges of the dilemma addressed
Rationale aligns with each moral system selected
Each moral system selected is uniquely addressed

2

2

Premises

3

Three for each argument and each moral system; important ideas

6

4

Conclusion

1

Aligns with the moral system selected; solution focused

2

2

Synthesis

0

Literature highlights challenges and contrast views

0

0

Total


Points earned are in advisory form and not assigned by instructor.

=SUM(ABOVE) 66

59

Comments for the author;
Introduction
All my attention were emphatically caught by the author in the introduction part! I totally loved how he introduced the key idea of an ethical dilemma on the technology of education. Furthermore, the point came out clearly and was vividly highlighted thus not only establishing the whole picture in my mind but also the right tone of his essay. Essay tone is significant of the part the author’s work (Palmquist & Mike 35), and for the reader to recognize the tone, he should, by all means, try to recognize the emotional part of the author. Furthermore, the author should, by all means, try to deliver their attitudes by the styles and words they decide to use in writing and thus establishing the mood of their work. All these points were well revealed in the introduction part of the author’s paper. In addition to that, the author managed to clearly give some supportive evidence by mentioning different authors of different literature, and thus displaying effective explanation behind the key ideas. Consequently, I was fully convinced that the author deserved to earn all the points as per my satisfaction in this particular part.
Modalities
In the author’s work, three different modalities are well stated and explained to the maximum. I was really impressed how the author clearly organized this particular elements through impressive paragraphs, which clearly shows the content possessed by the author on the issues concerning ethical dilemma on education technology. However, despite that incredible explanation of the three elements on the modality, the author only focuses on the technological and social aspects without reflecting on the perspective of political and economic dimensions. Therefore, due to that slight omission on other perspectives, the author manages to score only seven points.
Sources
In additional, the paper reflects on different sources of literature through a well-organized intext citations and in the work cited. Proper citation basing on the style of the author, was well done throughout the paper. It is clearly shown that the author being acknowledged in particular literature is impressively displayed by using brackets and page numbers of the referring source. In MLA style of writing is basically based on different principles and not specifically on an extensive list of rules (Seeber & Edward 106). The author of the paper used more than six different sources in describing different scenarios on the cyber ethics. The necessary information on the title page was well captured and organized in the required manner. Furthermore, the correct alphabetical order was managed while referencing and thus all the citation rules were observed. Therefore, that puts the author in a position to scoop all the points on this particular part of the essay.
Hurdles
In the essay, the au